Under the bed.
Walt we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing
This is work I have writing and editing myself it is still a work in progress
Michael was sound asleep until he heard are noise under his bed. He bolted out of bed.And
slowly peck under the bed there was nothing. Michael went back to bed than he heard it
again. This time he bolted up than bot bolted state down to peck under the bed he showed a
tiny mouse. So then he went back to the bed. He herd are dither noise this time it was
more louder he scardley peck under the bed it was nothing but then he heard it again
this time he was still looking down under the bed this time he shower the same mouse
doll but more bigger and scarier he took it and put it on the other side of the door that
leads to his Michael room Michael was still up and was playing with his toys until he heard
scratching at the door he hid behind the toy box than the door flew open it was Michael
Mum she told Michael to go back to sleep and Michael did as he was told and Michael mum
gave him a kiss then walk away closing the door behind her the mouse doll wasit there were he was before
Where was the doll than the noise Michael head before was back it was under the bed
Again this time it sounded so much louder i look under the bed there was nothing
Michael heard the noise again but it was under the but Michael was still looking
under the bed so then he looks up at the top of the bed than the thing dropped down
It had a knife and tried to get Michael but then it disappeared Michael went to go get his
mum but the door wooden buge than the mouse thing was behind him than he woke up and realized it was a dream the end
What do you thing is under the bed
It was hard to do this because had to do this over and over again because I kept on doing it wrong
